tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271551687505585331.post6674591017733864739..comments2022-11-03T03:11:58.470+13:00Comments on Collin: The TransformationPES Blogs 2013 Adminhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03043164228733682681noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271551687505585331.post-73694331622792263612016-07-19T15:25:54.019+12:002016-07-19T15:25:54.019+12:00Hi Collin. I enjoyed reading your story. Good use ...Hi Collin. I enjoyed reading your story. Good use of dialogue. I was expecting just a little more use of descriptive language. Just wondering how you came up with this idea for your story? Mrs Lagitupunoreply@blogger.com