tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271551687505585331.post6955178698534553838..comments2022-11-03T03:11:58.470+13:00Comments on Collin: Rio Olympics 2016 Narrative PES Blogs 2013 Adminhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03043164228733682681noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271551687505585331.post-14059445876306928122016-09-15T09:38:48.864+12:002016-09-15T09:38:48.864+12:00Hey its Summer from gilberthorpe I really
like ho...Hey its Summer from gilberthorpe I really <br />like how your story is really detailed and <br />when i was reading I thought it was real but <br />when I got to the end of the story I read how <br />you said i't was a narrative and I was surprise.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271551687505585331.post-10993596765865992016-09-15T09:32:04.925+12:002016-09-15T09:32:04.925+12:00Hi my name is Sonny I'm from Gilberthorpe scho...Hi my name is Sonny I'm from Gilberthorpe school I like your story.I think this is a good piece of work.<br />That's cool you used your imaginations.<br />bye.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271551687505585331.post-996030066481175072016-09-15T09:31:38.286+12:002016-09-15T09:31:38.286+12:00Hi Colin, my name is Hunter and I am from Gilberth...Hi Colin, my name is Hunter and I am from Gilberthorpe school. I like your post because you have used heaps of imagination in the story. This post reminds me of earlier in this year I came first in cross country because this post is sport related. My advice is to maybe do a different sport next time.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271551687505585331.post-75603438413809033742016-09-15T09:31:05.853+12:002016-09-15T09:31:05.853+12:00Hi Collin it's Jake here from Gilberthorpe Sch...Hi Collin it's Jake here from Gilberthorpe School. I'm here to tell you about your great story I like how you have made this story by your imagination. It reminds me of when I was at my old school and it was cross country day and I was half way from the finish line and I fell over and hurt myself really badly and I came second. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271551687505585331.post-60919398322694507172016-09-15T09:30:32.904+12:002016-09-15T09:30:32.904+12:00Hi it is Caleb from Gilberthorpe School and I am a...Hi it is Caleb from Gilberthorpe School and I am a year six and I love,really love that fabulous story. It made me think of me at athletics at school when I came first doing discus.<br />I also like how you have used your imagination and I want to be a olympion!<br />BYE:) Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271551687505585331.post-59940038261771200502016-09-15T09:29:06.397+12:002016-09-15T09:29:06.397+12:00Hi I'm Maddison from Gilberthorpe School and I...Hi I'm Maddison from Gilberthorpe School and I think your story is really good. I like the way you have done all of this with your imagination. I think you should do more stories like this. You can become an author in the future and I would read those books that you make and I would love to see more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271551687505585331.post-7662063213335168852016-09-15T09:28:25.967+12:002016-09-15T09:28:25.967+12:00Hi Collin my name is Aaliyah.I'm from Gilberth...Hi Collin my name is Aaliyah.I'm from Gilberthorpe School.I enjoyed the part when Georgia scored into the bullseye. Why did you write this? How come you put this story is not true it is a narrative which has been created by my imagination?Aaliyahnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271551687505585331.post-44035168199298865502016-09-15T09:27:23.814+12:002016-09-15T09:27:23.814+12:00Hi my name is Eli from Gilberthorpe School
That s...Hi my name is Eli from Gilberthorpe School <br />That story was great but I was just wondering what mad you want to write this.It was an awesome story could you maybe write more on that I would want to see more thanks bey. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com