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My Punctuation Goals

Cross Country Fun run

My feet pounding and my heart pumping running and running I started to get tired but I kept going.On thursday morning at school we were having Cross country.There were many teams like Te aroha Takitimu Tainui and matatoa.After lunch the teachers had set up the race and we were all waiting in the hot sun for our turn to run. I was in the line of the ten year old boys.

 Everyone was sitting down on the concrete while listening to where we have to run.We had to run around the reserve and come back we all thought it was easy but we were wrong .When it was our turn to run we stood up and walked to the starting line and stretched this way and that way.

 Ready set GO!!! I sprinted and sprinted until I couldn't take another breath but kept going.I ran past the teachers and I was almost there thats when I sprinted away and came tenth place. After all that I went and had a drink and went to class to play games.

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Once upon a time there was a girl named Little red riding hood.One day her grandma fell ill and she wanted to deliver some goodies to her so off she went.While wandering through the wood she skipped onto the wrong path and realised that a wolf was sneaking up behind her. he gently asked, “Where are you going little girl?” she replied softly of to my grandma’s house goodbye.The wolf raced ahead and and arrived to... grandma’s house he walk in and gobbled up the old lady.Little red had just walked in and he had also munched and munched her up.Luckily the hunter walk in and shot the wolf and out popped grandma and little red.They happily ever after.

This story is telling me not talk to strangers,follow the right path and to listen to your parents.

The moral of the story is to not to talk to strangers and to listen to your parents

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Little red riding hood

Once upon a time … there was a little girl named little red riding hood, she lived in a small cottage house with her mother. One day her grandma fell ill so little red riding hood went to deliver some goodies to her. Little red's mother had always told her to follow the footpath and especially not to talk to strangers, so off she went into the deep dark woods and on her way to see her grandma.

 As Little red is skipping along through the forest something catches her attention, out from behind a tree flew a little yellow butterfly. Little red decided to chase after it, but she realised that she was no longer on the right path and then remembered what her mother had told her, "always follow the path Little red"! Before she could get herself back onto the path she felt like suspicious eyes were upon her, she turned suddenly and saw that wolf popped out of the tree’s.

 He said what are you doing on this side of the forest, I’m of to deliver some goodies to my grandma said little red.While thinking of his plan he asked, “does grandma live on her own” oh yes replied little red the wolf said suspiciously oh well I’ll see you soon, then off she went singing along the way.Running and running as fast as he can the faster he arrived at his destination... to grandma’s house.

 The wolf knocked on the door grandma said, “whos there” the wolf replied “it’s me little red” trying to hide his Husky voice.Grandma said oh I’m so glad to see you little red the wolf said me too the old lady screamed to the top of her lungs, and with one swallow grandma disappeared.That moment little red knocked on the door the wolf quickly got dress and little red open the door but BANG!!! the wolf was dead the hunter walked in and and said finally you won’t scare anyone anymore.Little red walk in and saw that grandma popped out of the wolf’s belly and hugged little red and after that they lived happily ever after.

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My Rewritten Story

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One day in the farm there was a hare named Speedy he saw a really really slow Tortoise the hare thought Tortoise's head was shaped like a ball of cabbage and his feet looked like brussel sprouts Speedy laughed and laughed until Fox jumped out of the hedge row.Fox said Speedy why are you laughing don’t you know that Tortoise hibernates hiber what said Speedy hibernates it means that they sleep all winter all winter said Speedy he must be the laziest creature on the planet no you are wrong said Fox.Alright then lets see this hibernates. Fox said what about a challenge a running challenge easy peasy said Speedy.

   Moral

So the very next day in the afternoon Fox setup the race while he was making deals to the mouse,horse and the badger.Thats when started on your marks get set GO!!.Speedy race of an then stop and saw that Tortoise was far behind he hadn’t even move over the starting line.Thats when Speedy realized I have already past two hills there’s know way he’ll pass me.So thats when the hare decided to go chew on a nice juicy leaf.He said it such a glorious day sun shining grasshopers singing so he dozed of.

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A few hours later Speedy woke up it was almost Midnight he race to the finish line and saw that all the animals were gone except for the mouse horse and badger.Speedy yelled out what's my prize. The mouse squealed what’s your prize your is that we have to do Foxes draws for the week.Speedy raced off and yelled out happy cleaning.                     

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Slow and steady Wins the race!!!!!!

Friendship

What is a Friend,a friend is someone who is kind,happy and reliable.What makes a good Friend,what makes a good friend is to be a great listener and be honest.Why are they important,they are important because they always stick by your side no madder what.

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