My Rewritten Story

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One day in the farm there was a hare named Speedy he saw a really really slow Tortoise the hare thought Tortoise's head was shaped like a ball of cabbage and his feet looked like brussel sprouts Speedy laughed and laughed until Fox jumped out of the hedge row.Fox said Speedy why are you laughing don’t you know that Tortoise hibernates hiber what said Speedy hibernates it means that they sleep all winter all winter said Speedy he must be the laziest creature on the planet no you are wrong said Fox.Alright then lets see this hibernates. Fox said what about a challenge a running challenge easy peasy said Speedy.

   Moral

So the very next day in the afternoon Fox setup the race while he was making deals to the mouse,horse and the badger.Thats when started on your marks get set GO!!.Speedy race of an then stop and saw that Tortoise was far behind he hadn’t even move over the starting line.Thats when Speedy realized I have already past two hills there’s know way he’ll pass me.So thats when the hare decided to go chew on a nice juicy leaf.He said it such a glorious day sun shining grasshopers singing so he dozed of.

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A few hours later Speedy woke up it was almost Midnight he race to the finish line and saw that all the animals were gone except for the mouse horse and badger.Speedy yelled out what's my prize. The mouse squealed what’s your prize your is that we have to do Foxes draws for the week.Speedy raced off and yelled out happy cleaning.                     

                                                          THE END

Slow and steady Wins the race!!!!!!