Friday, 25 October 2013

This is my unedited story

This is my unedited version
Long long ago on a farm there was a old man named Chang he lived with his two sons Ping and Lang.Mrs Chang died while giving birth to Ping and Lang .Ping and Lang were very clumsy they had made mese everywhere .

Mr Chang was very poor but he was trying to save for his sons to go college. But they also needed money to pay there bills for the cottage house that they were sleeping in.It was really hard because Mr Chang only got paid 10 dollars in every week .

1 comment:

  1. i can see all your work now son and it looks great!!


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